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The First Night Home
There’s no comfort without contrast
The first night home
I close the door
And drop my pack
The furnace
Nudged by outside air
Awakens
Its blessed breath
Whispering relief
Not yet, not yet
My bending back protests
Still-stiff fingers loosen laces
Mud-caked boots take flight
Landing in a cloud of
Cracked clay and detritus
My feet, now free
Tender, near weightless
Throb with thanksgiving
Reveling in release
Spongy socks print footsteps
On bare boards
In mockery of thousands
Left along the trail
In the bathroom
I turn the taps
And use the toilet
As the bathtub fills
So does my heart
The time is now
I strip off clothes
Step in and sink
My battered body
Deep as it can go
In seeping heat
Amidst the steam
I grasp the truth, unvarnished:
The opposite of comfort
Is camping
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